It was a good idea but could have been executed slightly better.
Perhaps a different background - maybe with just a sky or something rather than the distracting dark lines of the house.
Maybe you could have made the whole picture slightly more in focus rather than simply focusing on the glasses and the models hand? Just a thought as maybe the soft background was what you were going for?
very unique, and a nice capture. I would have cropped in to show less of her torso and the background, in order to center the image and draw the viewer into the subject, instead of being able to wander too freely.