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Challenge: Framing (Basic Editing I)
Camera: Sony DSC-F717
Location: Alexandria, The Mediterranean Sea
Date: Aug 30, 2004
Date Uploaded: Aug 31, 2004

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Place: 248 out of 305
Avg (all users): 4.4846
Avg (commenters): 4.5000
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Sony Alpha a6400
Sony E 16-50mm f/3.5-5.6 PZ OSS
 09/14/2004 10:16:38 PM
Greetings from the Critique Club :)

Hi Shadowfax...

Sidenote: I'm listening to "Folksongs for a Nuclear Village" as I write this critique :)

This is a nice photo and I like most of what I see. The horizon tilt is not a good thing in this photo though. Also, as far as challenges are concerned, your score probalby suffered because your 'framing' element is not the primary impact of this photograph. It's a smaller secondary 'supportive' element. This particular image may have also made a stronger vertical shot as well....

John Setzler
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
Fujifilm X-T30
Nikon AF-S NIKKOR 24-70mm f/2.8G ED
 09/07/2004 11:34:17 PM
Nice idea; Could use some noise reduction though, and most of all, a level horizon!
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Canon EOS-1D
Canon EF 16-35mm f/2.8 L USM
 09/07/2004 04:06:12 PM
This pose looks a little too awkward...
  Photographer found comment helpful.
Nikon D200
Nikon AF-S DX NIKKOR 18-200mm f/3.5-5.6G ED VR II
 09/07/2004 12:05:00 AM
Nice silhouette. Crooked horizon, no framing.
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Fujifilm X100F
Nikon AF-S DX Zoom Nikkor 18-135mm f/3.5-5.6G IF-ED
 09/02/2004 11:30:00 AM
Neat pose - I'd be tempted to crop a bit tighter and level out the horizon.
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Nikon D200
Nikon AF-S DX Zoom Nikkor 12-24mm f/4.0G IF-ED
 09/01/2004 04:15:39 PM
Oh yes I see, the arm and body frame the sun.
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Canon EOS-20D
Canon EF 75-300mm f/4-5.6 IS USM
 09/01/2004 02:58:52 PM
clever.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
Nikon D5100
Tamron AF 28-80mm f/3.5-5.6 Aspherical for Nikon
 09/01/2004 11:18:04 AM
cleaver shot. A bit grainy, but not too bad
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Canon EOS-300D Rebel
 09/01/2004 06:16:53 AM
Nice photo, although framing only makes up a small amount of photo. Well done.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
Olympus C-740UZ
 09/01/2004 05:40:33 AM
You missed the frame. A shot itself is ok, but nothing special. And it's tilted. should have rotated it around 3deg left.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 09/01/2004 04:16:00 AM
Try framing a subject next time
  Photographer found comment helpful.
Canon EOS-300D Rebel
Canon EF-S 18-55mm f/3.5-5.6 USM
 09/01/2004 03:41:17 AM
Nice idea. This is a tough shot because the sky is so cloudless. Almost surreal. I kinda wish the subject wasn't dead center. It would have been nice if she and the sun were placed slightly more to the left of the frame.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
Canon EOS-550D Rebel T2i
 09/01/2004 02:58:25 AM
I am not trying to be negative here, possibly because I don't see it, but what does this have to do with the subject?
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Canon EOS-5D
Canon EF 28-135mm f/3.5-5.6 IS USM
 09/01/2004 12:15:35 AM
Too dark ... and its squish .. the framing isn't the best, its a great idea but needs technical improvment. I hope that helps a bit ..
  Photographer found comment helpful.
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