Voted earlier coming back to comment.
Good effort - I get the unsettling feeling that he is staring right at me but I can't 'see' his stare:-) You have taken a common scene and made it uncommon; stepping it into the realm of the supernatural. Now I do have one small critique and one suggestion to offer. First is that the position of the cup diminishes the illusion of an invisible man a tad. It seems to low as that the rim is level with the collar of the shirt. The mouth would be higher. Had the cup been at level with where the mouth would be, the illusion would be sustained 100%. Now my small suggestion, sometimes little added details can be the 'cherry on top' on an image. I think that something could have been added to the surface of the coffeecup in post processing to perhaps add humor like "Seeing is Believing" or maybe something from pop culture on superheroes like "I love X-men". |