Critique Club Critique
(1) COMPOSITION (CONTENT) – Everything is very centered – the hitchhiker and the horizon. Your title implies a car has stopped, but the photo does not. Not clear if he is walking or hitchhiking (despite the sign). I’d have liked to see him at far right, with a car stopped in the distance at far left (to fit your title). This would also show more road surface, giving a perspective of depth and distance.
(2) BACKGROUND – good. See comments on composition. Horizon should probably not be so centered, even if you changed composition as suggested.
(3) CAMERA WORK ,TECHNICAL – focus & DOF look good.
(4) DIGITAL PROCESSING ,TECHNICAL – no recommendations. Personally, I don’t worry about the jpeg artifacts as one comment did.
(5) MY OPINION ON THE PHOTO – A good idea,meets challenge, but an average “snapshot” – based entirely on the composition.
Jim msp
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