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I see how you've retained some detail in the darkest shadows. I see elements in the scene which might have been chosen by AA to be the subject of the scene, but, for example, you're too far away from those craggy trees on the point, or in the water just off the point. Those could have been shapes of interest, with the water and hillside supporting the composition. As is, the scene needs a focal point. It's sort of there with the point of land and the far shore. My eyes go there and I find myself wishing to be closer. |