You certainly were successful in showing movement. I can feel your franticism...lol This meets the "Travel" challenge, and shows a creative thought process. I seem to recall you mentioning that you were looking for an idea at the last minute, and you portrayed that well.
Without the title it would be a little difficult to determine just what is occuring here, but works well with the title.
The white is somewhat blown out, but lol mine was much worse! LOL
I'd like the entire image to be more focused. Too much detail is lost.
You made a real good effort though, and came through!
Grayce...cc
I realize this is intentionally out of focus to show movement (frantic packing), but it's too much so for me personally. All I can give it is a 3. The suitcase is in focus. PTL