I'm not sure about this shooting angle.. it seems to produce awkward results. Also, a little room between the edge of the photo and the arm at the top would have been good. 5
very nice shot... i love the even tones across your subject in this one... the only thing that is possibly an area for improvement woudl be to either have her eyes all the way open or all the way closed. The model's right eye (viewer's left eye) is also significantly darker than the other... maybe a minor change in lighting or a bounce flash from above would even that out some... very good work.. = 9 - setzler
Odd angle... not sure how I feel about the arms taking up the entire photo. If I had to change something it would be for her to wear a solid colored shirt without texture.