Greetings from the Critique Club!
Nice use of grain and b/w, I like the 3/4 pov on the empty cup and reflection. Not so crazy about the bleachy area on the right, it could have been burned out to reduce the glare; it draws attention away from the subject.
Otherwise a decent image, I might have tried to push the idea of late-night desperation for joe by showing an empty or almost-empty coffeepot or Bodum next to it to drive the point home. Good work, keep on entering!
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Susan |