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01/14/2003 12:08:48 PMPost actions
Thank you for your comments
01/09/2003 06:40:22 PMPost actions
...from Critique Club...
Hi Diana
FIRST IMPRESSION:
Just a snapshot :(
COMPOSITION:
I think a wider crop would have worked better, to get more of the landscape. The subject is too centered. :(
TECHNICAL:
Nice focus. Seems a bit dark, though...increasing the exposure a bit would have helped. :|
ARTISTIC:
It's a cute photo, but not very interesting to look at...sorry :(
OVERALL:
I think there is potential, but it would need improvement in the technical dept. :(
Cheers and good luck in the future challenges.
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Comments Made During the Challenge
01/05/2003 11:40:33 PMPost actions
01/05/2003 08:06:49 PMPost actions
It's a shame the photo is so dark we can't see their faces. I'd love to see the expressions. I like to cropping and the focus and the subject and the compotions. Just need better execution. 5 PTL
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01/05/2003 04:57:34 PMPost actions
Nice snapshot (looks like fun), but the exposure setting that results in dingy looking snow detracts.
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01/05/2003 01:03:17 AMPost actions
Too bad we don't see the faces of the people.... too dark
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01/03/2003 01:00:06 PMPost actions
Lighting on the subjects is pretty feeble, can't see his face at all.
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01/02/2003 11:28:15 AMPost actions
Would be better if some detail was visible on the faces.
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