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Hi Chuck, this is a good idea; obviously you chose the minimalism and the communication between simple materials: glass, iron, air, water(clouds). That was a excellent option. I do have 2 remarks that could advantageously impact the reading of your picture: 1) Transparency could have been better exploited, perhaps with a more populated sky (but you are not God, you are just Chuck) 2) The structure of the pyramid is a bit confusing (too many lines in too many directions), perhaps it could have been simplified by changing the point of view (?). However this is a good picture. Congrats :-)) |
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