I like the light on this model. Very sharp. I love this man's expression. You really captured him in a moment of repose, it seems. He reminds me a bit of my own father, which makes my vote increase!
the bookshelf behind is somewhat distracting. I'm tempted to say I'd have cropped out the right side past his face, but I do like having the extra space, it'd just be better if there were nothing there. Of course I understand this was probably unavoidable. It looks like the light is a little bit harsh as well. I do like the expression and the pose in general. It's a good shot. 7
I like this shot. I think the lighting on his face is perfect. I might have cropped out most of the stuff on the right side, but then again, it does kind of lend a sense of "place" to the shot.
Awesome textured face, but I think this picture loses out some because of the lighting, and maybe the contrast. The background is also quite distracting. Since I'm guessing this is a family member, or someone readily available for photos, I would have tried to put him on a plain or solid background.
Nice shot. I like the lighting but I would have preferred more sharpness on the face. It's the face that defines this photo and it seems just a little soft.