Greetings from the Critique Club!
Pleasant scene, and glad that the one commenter was mistaken, thinking the frame of the railings had been added in pp. Though I have to admit it does look like it could have been added later.
Good use of thirds with the boardwalk leading us into the shot, but once again it needs a bit more pop in terms of colour (without going overboard of course) and something in terms of a subject on the boardwalk to break up the scene and create a focal point. Right in that bend of the boardwalk, someone coming or going would have been great and given more of a sense of purpose to the shot.
You're dfinitely improving in terms of technicals, Adam; now's the time to start getting the creative side going and give us a little more to see.
Feel free to PM me
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