That is just so cool! I love the shape of that breast, it's just such a beautiful curve. Mine are too big for photos like this (sigh). I'm giving this 10!
The louvered doors/shutters in the background distract from this. I think this is a manequin.. is it? would be more powerful with a completely black background.
I think this would be a bit better had the entire background been the dark cloth being held by the left arm. I think that the closet doors do nothing for this shot. The bright light from the left also is a bit too bright in my opinion. It almost washes out the decoration (painting?) on the nipple. The curvature against the black cloth is good, I like that, and the angle and framing/cropping is also good. Good luck in the challenge.
i think the funnest part must have been doing the painting :) interesting composition. i dont like the blinds upper right. and the breast is a bit too b right on the left. tone that down a bit and you could have a great shot. i love the skin texture.
I think this is a well done shot, but the louvres in the background on the right are not the best choice of background possibly... good shot :) - setzler