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I can see the abstraction you were going for but you need to include more of the figure and restructure to composition if you want it to have that sexy appeal I think you were going for. (i assume because I think it's a woman in a bra) sometimes this sort of thing works well and a lot of the time I find colours to be a huge asset to achieve success. I think were it goes awry is the weird way the shoulder is jutting up and out there, kind of ...what. lol. |