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04/16/2012 02:54:14 AMPost actions
I think a much tighter crop on this might have interested me more. I like the gleaming colour of the key.
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04/14/2012 07:58:55 PMPost actions
really nice dof. I like how the mat is positioned...horiz along the front, and angled as it extends into the image
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04/14/2012 02:25:09 PMPost actions
Originally posted by FourPointX:
awesome idea, almost well executed, love the dof but someone earlier commented about the angle to the key...to see more shape would have helped.
Agreed.
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04/13/2012 11:26:48 AMPost actions
awesome idea, almost well executed, love the dof but someone earlier commented about the angle to the key...to see more shape would have helped.
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04/13/2012 09:14:59 AMPost actions
Great shallow DOF and focus.
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04/13/2012 08:56:47 AMPost actions
The key shines! Terrific point of focus.
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04/13/2012 12:00:46 AMPost actions
I think this is one of my favourite's that you have done. Like your POV, focus & tones. The debris doesn't really bother me -isn't that what outdoor matts are for? (well, I do just want to remove that white bit)
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04/12/2012 05:40:24 PMPost actions
I agree with Jon_H about the debris. LOVE the DOF.
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04/12/2012 05:22:54 PMPost actions
I like the angles that run through the image and it certainly looks natural but there are pieces of debris that are competing for the viewers attention.
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04/12/2012 05:02:29 PMPost actions
I like the concept here...Nice DOF. I think I would have changed the angle slightly
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03/30/2012 06:53:45 AMPost actions
thats funny,i had the same idea ,only iwould have not shown the key at all
but i thought that would have been the brown one
so i left it (the challenge) alone
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Comments Made During the Challenge
03/28/2012 07:19:06 AMPost actions
The angle is too steep to actually make out the shape of key. Still a good attempt. Goodluck.
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03/24/2012 03:29:34 PMPost actions
Good use of selective focus. Maybe edit out the bright white fiber near the left edge, and get closer to the key so that it fills more of the frame.
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