Very intriguing, artistic vision expressed here. Nice work. I wish there were more light on the gentleman. Perhaps after the challenge you can simply dodge him a bit?
having him behind 2 sets of bars makes it unclear what the purpose of the bars is, if you had used 1 set we would have to spend more time figuring it out
Grandfather may be a little too dark, he is not part of the primary subject, but I think more light back there could have improved the image. Also...a near merge with the utility pole behind grandpa. I like the bright blue frames though...a fun one!