Greetings from the Critique Club!
Great studio setup, just needs a reflector on the left a bit more to kill the shadows. The vivid eye makeup is fun to look at and offsets her eyes and the pumpkin very well. But I do wish the edge of the lollipop wasn't so close to her nose, it draws attention to that area, and for the wrong reason. If it were just a couple inches lower or turned a couple of degrees to the side, we could have seen that nice lopsided smile she has and the pumpkin's smile too.
Feel free to PM me,
Susan |