Here's a couple of thoughts:
It looks pretty and is certainly more interesting than the standard power-point presentation.
Is the presentation representative of the product it's selling? I ask because the presentation is quite showy, so does the product live up to the fancy graphics?
Personally I'm not keen on reading text that isn't horizontal.
There are places where the English grammar isn't quite right.
Maybe it's cultural, or I'm not up with the latest buzz-words but why "spicy"??
Finally:- I realise it's some technical term that I don't know the meaning of but could you explain "standard and interactive SMS Bras" |
