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Nikon D90
Tokina AF 11-16mm f/2.8 116 AT-X Pro DX for Nikon
 11/01/2009 03:59:34 PM · #1
i've been trying to work on my composition lately, rather then just showing the action.

i tried to include the riders watching on the side (on the thirds line) and then put the main subject on the intersecting thrids line.

bum shots are usually not a good thing for sports photos but i think it works here.

tell me what you think!



Message edited by author 2009-11-01 15:59:49.
Samsung Galaxy S24, S24+, S24 Ultra
Sony Vario-Tessar T* FE 24-70mm f/4 ZA OSS
 11/01/2009 04:06:38 PM · #2
I don't think anything about it works, sorry. Including the bum, LOL. In your search for "composition" you've lost any sense of a focal point for the action and the image. If we could see his face, that might become a focal point, but...

R.
Canon EOS-30D
Canon EF 50mm f/1.8 II
 11/01/2009 04:13:50 PM · #3
Must admit i think it works as a collection of shapes, but you only have to look at my sciores and favourites to know that me liking it is the kiss of death.
Nikon D90
Tokina AF 11-16mm f/2.8 116 AT-X Pro DX for Nikon
 11/01/2009 07:36:01 PM · #4
Originally posted by Bear_Music:
I don't think anything about it works, sorry. Including the bum, LOL. In your search for "composition" you've lost any sense of a focal point for the action and the image. If we could see his face, that might become a focal point, but...

R.


noted, thanks!
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