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Canon EOS-5D Mark II
Canon EF 70-200mm f/2.8 L IS USM
 01/05/2009 03:26:43 PM · #1
Hey everyone - i have a portrait uploaded to my portfolio and could use a c&c to see if im on the right track or not. Have a lot of other shots but this is just the only one i had time to do last night.

I also learned after my last request to not ask opinions on something id consider putting in a challenge. Im new and didnt know so id like to apologize to you guys/girls.file is named Halley.
Pentax K10D
Pentax DA 18-55mm f/3.5-5.6 AF
 01/05/2009 03:28:01 PM · #2
[thumb]753319[/thumb]
Canon EOS R6
Canon RF 100mm f/2.8 L Macro IS USM
 01/05/2009 03:30:39 PM · #3
Here's the thumb:
[thumb]753319[/thumb]
I'm really new to portraiture, but FFIW, I'm noticing that her left arm seems to be oddly suspended or resting on something invisible. I might also avoid cropping off part of her hand. I do like how her eyes match the sweater.

ETA faidoi beat me to it

Message edited by author 2009-01-05 15:31:32.
Canon EOS-5D Mark II
Canon EF 70-200mm f/2.8 L IS USM
 01/05/2009 03:32:59 PM · #4
Thanks for posting the thumb. Im on my iphone and cant copy/paste :(
Thanks for the tips. I must have cropped it with the camera - didnt do any cropping in cs4
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