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06/23/2008 04:55:22 PM · #1
I just love the newest member of my family, the 60 2.8 micro (my son Finn too of course!)
Here is one of my favorite shots I've gotten with it.
One thing I noticed is I tend to get up close and personal due to the close focusing ability which makes for some interesting not always intended compositions.
What do you think?
(thanks for looking)


06/23/2008 04:58:06 PM · #2
It's very cute, and I like the close view,however I think the way his lower lip and left eye are slightly cut off hurts it a bit. Pulled back just a little would improve it a lot.
06/23/2008 05:55:23 PM · #3
Originally posted by yospiff:

It's very cute, and I like the close view,however I think the way his lower lip and left eye are slightly cut off hurts it a bit.


Slightly?

EDIT to add, beautiful baby, great catch light and the expression is priceless. The DOF seems a little shallow (the nose seems OOF). And I'm not sure if you were trying to cut off the facial features, but if so, it's a distracting effect.

Message edited by author 2008-06-23 22:06:19.
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