So I've never really done something like this, but a friend of mine was feeling down the other day so I thought something like this (the Teen one) would pick her up a bit... the second was just for fun... and I'm doing a third one too... not quite done yet.... what do you all think
that's nice of you. i hope they cheer her up. i think the picture on the teen one is a little dark and you could whiten her teeth a bit too. the text on both of them look odd to me. try playing with the kerning and leading so that each word/letter fits into place better =)
On the teen shot, you really shoulda selected for the teeth and taken some yellow out, don't ya think? Otherwise, cool fun.
R.
I also think there is nothing wrong with the teeth. Must be an American thing. The dentist told my daughter that slightly yellowed teeth are healthier/stronger than pure white. Perfect teeth look unnatural to me.
edit to add, I think she will love it. It would cheer me up if someone went to the trouble of doing something like that for me!