The biggest thing that sticks out to me is that you need to either get on the other side of the fence or go to 2.8 and stick the hood against the fence to kill that distraction. I'd also shoot or crop some of the other action stuff a little tighter, some alot tighter. Otherwise not too bad.
Matt
this could actually go tighter, all the dead space adds nothing to the photo, but thats cropped for paper use size.
< shot through fence, no fence lines and reflections to distract from the action.
Message edited by author 2008-03-30 20:54:45. |