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Nikon D90
Nikon AF-S DX 18-105 f/3.5-5.6 ED VR
 03/08/2008 08:15:38 AM · #1
Hello all, just a quick request to anyone who has a second to give me a bit of criticism on my Free study entry - I only got one comment and ended up around 300th - nice. I like this shot and it's the first thing I've ever had published (albeit in a minor way).



Much appreciated,

J
Canon EOS-40D
Canon EF 70-300mm f/4.5-5.6 DO IS USM
 03/08/2008 09:57:31 AM · #2
I commented then read the only comment you got during the challenge.

I think that says it all. The eyes need to be in focus.
Nikon D700
Sigma 24-70mm f/2.8 EX DG Macro for Nikon
 03/08/2008 10:24:58 AM · #3
Left a comment.
Canon EOS-60D
Tamron AF 28-300mm f/3.5-6.3 XR Di LD Aspherical IF for Canon
 03/08/2008 10:27:59 AM · #4
I think a different crop to let the mask take up the frame and better focus on the eyes may have helped. Hope you didn't mind but I did a quick edit to illustrate what I'm trying to say.

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Hope this helps
Scott W
Canon EOS-5D
Canon EF 16-35mm f/2.8 L USM
 03/08/2008 10:29:22 AM · #5
left you a comment
Nikon D700
Nikon AF-S NIKKOR 24-70mm f/2.8G ED
 03/08/2008 10:44:18 AM · #6
I also left a comment.

Keep in mind that people tend to vote tougher on the free study challenges. Also, people may vote on what appeals to them, and clowns aren't universally liked. There was also a very recent clown challenge.

Btw, check out these new carnival shots from silverscreen:

//www.dpchallenge.com/portfolio.php?USER_ID=66353&collection_id=28114

Message edited by author 2008-03-08 10:44:47.
Nikon D90
Nikon AF-S DX 18-105 f/3.5-5.6 ED VR
 03/08/2008 11:14:07 AM · #7
Thanks guys, advice taken on board.
Nikon D90
Nikon AF-S DX 18-105 f/3.5-5.6 ED VR
 03/08/2008 11:17:49 AM · #8
P.s If anyone is interested I have a few more shots from the Venice carnival on my Flickr account here.

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