I like the black setting and the three shots -- I'm thinking the copyright note/symbol should be smaller -- as is it look like it's part of the title as the size makes it an element in your composition. (editted for typos)
I like the black setting and the three shots -- I'm thinking the copyright note/symbol should be smaller -- as is it look like it's part of the title as the size makes it an element in your composition. (editted for typos)
ok, I took your advice. I now have 2 in my portfolio. Which do you like better?
The smaller is better -- if I might suggest a further reduction and change in placement (it still seems part of the composition vs. a signature and note) -- perhaps off to one side and lower so someone could frame and mat the lovely image with this just above the mat (or on two separate lines - keep your name more as a part of the image but the copyright off the image so a mat could cover it without destroying the symetry of the piece.
I looked through DPC Prints and have seen a few examples where this is all the way in the margin - completely off the image.
Nice job, and I like the fact that you went back and fixed the kerning in "The Band".
If I had to make any criticism, it would be that I would make the space around all the pictures match. As it is now the space between the pictures is wider than the space on top, right and left.
Are you really 14? You are entirely too talented! I can't even remember what I was doing at that age...but I know I wasn't creating awesome posters! Great job!
Are you really 14? You are entirely too talented! I can't even remember what I was doing at that age...but I know I wasn't creating awesome posters! Great job!
