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frumoaznicul
Canon EOS-20D
Canon EF-S 18-55mm f/3.5-5.6
03/01/2004 11:49:07 AM
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Hi I would like some critique and comments on this. Thank you for your times.
GoldBerry
Canon EOS-5D Mark II
Canon EF 50mm f/1.4 USM
03/01/2004 01:09:36 PM
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I like the idea and the lighting, needs sharper focus, though and for me [personally] the model's expression doesn't enhance the image.
jmsetzler
Sony Alpha a6400
Sony E 16-50mm f/3.5-5.6 PZ OSS
03/01/2004 01:29:03 PM
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I commented on the photo, but I do think the facial expression works well in the context of this image. The dark lighting and the warm glow seem to create some amount of 'despair' in the image...
frumoaznicul
Canon EOS-20D
Canon EF-S 18-55mm f/3.5-5.6
03/01/2004 05:09:48 PM
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thank you well the model is my fiance she's good at that but as a model is uncontrolable :)
frumoaznicul
Canon EOS-20D
Canon EF-S 18-55mm f/3.5-5.6
03/02/2004 06:31:30 PM
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I wonder if changing it's title from "GOLD" to "Taste of GOLD" doesn't work better with model's expression...
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