I like it compositionally, though it does need more contrast. You may want to move in the balck point in "levels", and move in the white point as well. The blown reflection of the un in the water trows up a peak near the right of the histogram; move the white point to the left of this, and justlet the reflection be blown out; it works fine here.
You could also add just a touch of sharpening to the web version, though the high-resolution version may not need it.
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