The image you posted here was enough to get my attention, so I took a quick look at your work. I have to say I'm impressed by everything under 'single images' and will need to find some time later this evening to give it a more serious look.
Of course I think you should toss some of those into a portfolio here as well :-)
It gets better as you go down the page though which I think lets you down because you need your strongest stuff at the top as thats what you first see.
Beyond that, a lot of the b/w pics looked very flat to me (very grey) with not much contrast. This could easily be remedied though.
But you have some good shots in there, the ones of Val are good although if the colour one was taken with her eyes open and looking at the camera it would have been brilliant because she's a pretty girl. Nice work.
