I don't think it looks contrived, but compared to the remainder of the image, the dolls head is very small AND the image itself is not sizeable, making the focus of your photo quite difficult to stand out.
I'm not sure how many view points you took this from, but for my mind if it was high in a tree, I'd have gotten down quite low and shot up into the tree rather than through the tree and capture so much of the building in the background.
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