The frame didn't bother me too much, but the original was just a bit too cluttered to give me an "at rest" kind of feel. Though, I got what you were going for. I gave it a weak 5 - coulda gone 4.
This shot I would have given a solid 6, and with a little cleanup or a little more effort, could have gone 7 or higher. The simplicity of the single boat, tied at anchor, in the calm water, works very well for conveying a sense of calm. |