OK let me be clearer with my critique. The problem with your first pic is that there's this unnatural black outline that makes the planet look drawn. Second, the blur to the right is very big (significantly occupying space that makes it a third focal point). To me, it looks like a swooshy pompom physically attached to the main planet in focus. Your Everlasting composition, however, is very well done. Nothing much I'd do to change it.
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