There are many things wrong with your post.
1. The first letter of the first word of a new sentence is always capitalised. This, of course, would hold true for both the title and the body of the post.
2. There is an assumption here that we know who the (again) uncapitalised Drew is, (there's more than one) and that some offer of explanation can be made as to the origin of his unsavoury character. Nature? Nurture? Too much coffee? One will never know without a more detailed explanation.
3. The indefinite article 'a' should be replaced with 'an'.
4. There is an incorrectly placed colon and a pairless bracket before the question mark.
Message edited by author 2003-08-13 03:11:52. |
