Evening all. I decided to use the advice given to me by David in the critique of my Office Art entry 'Morning Coffee' to good use (not to say it would have been wasted if I had not done this of course) and as such I came up with a different version here.
In the original shot I was hoping to catch the steam coming from the cup, but that didn't work at all. Given that I, really should have re-thought the shot, but I didn't and as such my score probably suffered from it - since the cup was a bit of a bland feature.
Anyway, I just wanted to post the two images here and ask for your thoughts on the subject... Do you prefer the original? Do you feel I've put the advice to good use? I would really appreciate some feedback from these.
Cheers, Alan.
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