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Panasonic Lumix FZ45
04/13/2003 05:08:20 AM · #1
This is any good?

//www.pbase.com/image/15371977
Canon EOS-10D
04/13/2003 05:48:04 AM · #2
Not that I'm qualified to say..., but anyway...

I like it. But I might like it more if the glider was closer, or if the lighting covered more of the chute, but that's hard to control. But it does work well for an empty space pic, and it's a great action shot.

Canon EOS-10D
04/13/2003 09:24:49 AM · #3
Nice. Crop a bit?
Nikon D3000
04/13/2003 09:36:52 AM · #4
I have to agree crop it, but other than needing cropped it has a very nice appeal.
Sony DSC-F717
04/13/2003 12:52:51 PM · #5
Try to keep the horizon level. I would also suggest to crop it tighter around the paraglider. Use the original file to do this, maybe you can bring back some color in the dark area's of the chute. when you crop the picture, make sure you give te paraglider room on the right(I believe it moved in that direction). This will give the paraglider "room to move". The space on the left can be much less.

Message edited by author 2003-04-13 12:53:11.
Canon EOS-500D Rebel T1i
Canon EF-S 18-55mm f/3.5-5.6 IS
04/13/2003 03:43:54 PM · #6
Originally posted by Damitriel:
Try to keep the horizon level.


Maybe normally this would be good advice, but I feel in this photo i want to see the horizon MORE tilted, to give a better feel of action in the photo. As it is now, the tilt just looks like a small error, but making it have a dramatic angle will enhance the photo imo.
Canon EOS-500D Rebel T1i
Canon EF-S 18-55mm f/3.5-5.6 IS
04/13/2003 03:46:47 PM · #7

Sony DSC-F717
04/13/2003 04:30:12 PM · #8
Konador you are right, this looks more dynamic.

Message edited by author 2003-04-13 16:30:27.
Panasonic Lumix FZ45
04/13/2003 05:40:02 PM · #9
Thanks for the advice,

Ben the certainly looks most dramatic
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