I think its a very good concept. Needs a bit more excitement, it feels very rigid..reminds me of my shots sometimes..meaning a neat idea..technically well done but a bit cold.
Maybe a more dramatic and lower angle..pull in tighter to the persons body, lower and/or closer with more dramatic lighting.
Hard to say though. Experimentation is worth a try though. And the Computer generated list feels very cold...Maybe a handwritten set of notes on spiral notebook paper with the torn out left side edges.
Forgive me I am rambling on..just thinking out loud :-)
(edited lover versus lower angle..although..now that I think about it :-)
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