The hot hair on the first is a bit distracting, but since it is mostly backlit I'm not worried about it -- but the clipping of the head and sweatshirt are a bit odd.
After watching 'The Punisher', the second one is a bit morbid for me.
The third one is nice, but doesn't really say anything to me -- so I will just comment that if you could have had the man step back and slightly to his right his shadow would not have fallen across the boy. But I realize a candid is not something you have a lot of control over.
