This was supposed to be my entry before making the mistake of posting the above image. A totally uninspired challenge for me with poor photo results so I have to exorcise it and show the story
Thank you Mary. The subject had better possibilities and I am awfully exigent with any of my works.
If I had to mark and comment my entries I won't fare too well sometimes although I mark under 4 very rarely.
I gave a 6 to your entry because (despite the comment you got from Kiwinick) I find this interesting. I would have cut out the 20% from the left.
Your outtake, on the other hand, would not get more than a 5.