Brian,
I like the image, I think it suits the photography style. A couple of things though - do you need an intro screen? A lot of the time you can get across the same info on the front page of the site without making people do the extra click. You could use this image on the front/intro page instead.
The other thing is that you might want to consider optimising your image a little. I understand that this is a mockup, but it's 80k - I'd try to get it down to 30k if you can.
My 2c, hope I didn't offend :)
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