Get rid of all the color shots except for the one of the kids on the swing (convert it to black and white to match the others) and you have what I believe is a winning portfolio there. Outstanding work. Powerfully emotive and cohesive collection of somber and exhuberant images each of which is well-titled and gives a glimpse into the mind behind an artful eye. Look forward to seeing more in the future.
You've got some great work in there...especially the B&W stuff...but I do love the pics of the little girl. Thanks for sharing! Hope to see more.
Yes, those are excellent photos as well but I would recommend putting together a more tightly managed portfolio. It looks more professional. I consider your black and whites art while the little girl shots would be great if you wanted to showcase your ability to take headshots and family photos. I'd try to separate the genres.
Those black and white's were my first attempt at converting digital to black and white, and I actually posted them here a while back and got a good response.