The picture looks really nice, but geez, what's up with that watermark? I guess you took the picture for free to help her and want something from it, maybe future business (I don't know), but that watermark steals much more attention from me than what the picture does.
Since it's a photo for a model's portfolio I must say: From this photo I would NEVER give here a modelling job because I can't see her face. I don't want to be too harsh, but this makes me think of an ugly girl with a great body taking pictures for FaceBook.
The shadows on her stomach makes her look two-three months pregnant, and the pose gives her enormous birth giving hips which in the modelling business isn't the #1 thing they look for. (Before anyone says something; I'm NOT calling her fat, she's everything but fat).
I think for this picture a fill flash would have been so much better, to get rid of some of those harsh shadows on her.
The border is for me a bit too much as well. |