STEEL WEB
by Ja-9

Comment by posthumous:
i like how far this has pushed into the abstract. i like the element in the bottom quadrant that breaks the symmetry. but the symmetry that remains keeps it from being completely compelling.

Dreams in Motion
by Ja-9

Comment by MaryO:
I like all the motion, and your color palette.

Abandoned Journey
by Ja-9

Comment by smurfguy:
Really pretty tones. 7 from me.

Beneath Endless Skies
by Ja-9

Comment by ericwoo:
Hey there from the Critique Club

My thoughts on the image: I like the depth of the image, and your composition choice here is perfect. That river really work to pull me into the frame.

My ideas for improvement: Something feels off with the depth to me. I think if the hill faces had been a bit more exposed in the photo joining, this one would have popped for me a bit more.

Where I would have/did score this entry: This one was a 6 for me, so I feel the score was pretty accurate. It was awesome to see the participation in this challenge. With that came a lot of very strong entries. Even still, this is a very nice capture!

Thank you for the opportunity to provide a critique on your entry,
Eric

Dreams in Motion
by Ja-9

Comment by tanguera:
Love these colors

Dreams in Motion
by Ja-9

Comment by posthumous:
good color combo. a bit too fluffy though

Beneath Endless Skies
by Ja-9

Comment by nam:
So many elements to like and admire - the sky, the cliffs, the river, the plains - and all in one scene. Lovely.

Beneath Endless Skies
by Ja-9

Comment by colorcarnival:
The clarity and sharpness is so amazing to me. A beautiful view!

Beneath Endless Skies
by Ja-9

Comment by glad2badad:
Very nice detail on the distant clouds. Fun location for a canoe or kayak.

Beneath Endless Skies
by Ja-9

Comment by posthumous:
i want to know more about this river.