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Comment by tvsometime:
Crispy capture of intersecting linear precision and wobbly reflected counterpoint. Lovely visual sonata. voted earlier

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Comment by snaffles:
Greetings from the Critique Club!

Nice use of a strong diagonal to give it a dynamic look, mostly good tones but a little too close to the Land o' Clorox for my liking in the upper right and bottom left. I do like the smooth curvy undulation in the middle (a leetle too close to the safe zone but at least it's a focal point), definitely gives it the sense of fluidity as promised in your title. Maybe voters were a little frustrated by the lack of colour and not being able to tell what kind of fluid it was meant to be - wine, tinted water, tea, coffee etc.

Hope this has been helpful, feel free to PM me

Susan

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Comment by markwiley:
This one captivates.

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Comment by mariuca:
Very well captured - not too little, not too much, just the right geometry and composition

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Comment by Lydia:
8 from me. Love the squigglies. :D

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Comment by bmartuch:
So many angles and reflections.

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Comment by Lydia:
Greetings from the Critique Club!

This is really lovely, Janine!

Those trees and the road leading us in from everywhere are effective and gorgeous. The colors seem a bit off... the purple ground, but the greens are fabulous.

I gave it a 7 during voting. I do get just a bit disappointed when I get to where all of those leading lines led me and... there's just brightness. I find myself wanting an 'exclamation point' there instead of a 'period'. Perhaps two people holding hands silhouetted? Maybe not even a dark silhouette... just a suggestion of a person/people.

I dunno... but I probably would have given an 8 or 9 with a surprise at the end after such a gorgeous build-up.

Still, it's a fabulously lovely image, Janine. You should be proud of it.

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Comment by Kroburg:
Really like the processing.

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Comment by clickodak:
Gorgeous Give 9

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Comment by pixelpig:
Nice & smooth & abstract. Just what the doctor ordered.