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ytshuvaComment by FrankRobinson: Hi Kobi - welcome to the Critique Zone!
My first impressions - this is a really nice shot. I have always been a fan of those who can get light to work for them
'photo-graphy' and you definitely have here. But it is a shame about the background. Why couldn't the screen manufacturer have made it a little taller?
Technically, I would have been interested to see this taken at f2.8 just to try and blur out those pot plants. Other than that, the focus is perfect and of course the lighting is what makes it.
Artistically, I would wonder how much to ascribe to you and how much to your model, but looking at some of your other work, either you are very lucky or you have a way of getting your models to give you what you need! This is really natural with a very nicely balanced composition.
I like it, like I said, it's just a shame that screen wasn't a tiny bit higher!
Happy hunting,
Frank.