End of an Eraby
jnenvirComment by Paul: OK, I'm going through the Free Study submissions, purposefully finding those images I think are shot with a less conventional eye - this is one of those images! Thanks for offering something that isn't just DPC friendly eye-candy (though of course there's nothing wrong with eye-candy). I'll be picking one of these images for the Mu (most underrated) award:
Positives: This image offers the viewer something they wouldn't see every day - I like that. I also like the perspective your POV has offered, it has a geometric quality that leads the eye in a zig-zag pattern. The RAMBLER text and the sunken wheels of the trailer are the highlights of the image for me.
Critical stuff: The aspect ratio of the image is an interesting - I must say that I feel a little constrained while viewing it. The zig-zag my eyes take happens quite rapidly and the limited lateral real estate in the composition makes viewing feel a little like playing pinball! The coloration and the tone mapping is a little overpowering but I am sure this is intentional. If I were to pick a real hole in the image it would relate to the lighting which is a little flat to add much drama to the scene.
Overall: I think this image delivers what you set out to achieve - it is grungy, gritty and stark. However, I think the flat lighting makes this scene a little less effective as an image than it might have been.