Comment by TCGuru: I like the way you pulled your shoulders up ever so slightly... makes it seem like you are giggling and remembering special moments with a boy that gave you that flower. I like the selective desat, it keeps the attention on you. The angle and framing you chose is interesting, makes me feel like I am peeking around the corner at you and you are oblivious to my presence. Nice work.
Comment by dwterry: I like the selective desat. One additional thing I think I'd do would be to soften up the texture in the rug. I feel that it is taking some attention away from you.
Comment by jonnienye: its not cheesey sweetie,its you! good to see ya smiling! like Jojo im a sucker for the selective desat,nicely done...i agree the border keeps this about you,holding ones attention