Comment by JaimeVinas: Nice tone to it, however its a bit cluttered. Then again most abandoned buildings are from the inside. Perhaps an outside shot would have been better IMHO
Comment by LoveSpuds: This is a great building and a brilliant choice for you to shoot. For me though, you have missed an opportunity here. I think shooting earlier or later in the day would have given some moody lighting and perhaps a lower viewpoint could have helped with the composition.
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