Night Construction
by NikonJeb

Comment by raish:
Let's see now - Alfred Hitchcox was forever tilting the camera to bring out the oddity/scariness etc in a scene. Whether or not you intended that, it hasn't worked here for me. I would have used the horisontal floors or the roof line for orientation and cropped to that. That's one of my pet peeves though, so it may be worth ignoring.
The area under arc lights is effectively blown out. I think that works against the theme of the picture. It's good for the construction workers, but to put over the idea of night work in a picture, maybe it would be better that the work were more poorly lit, and the shadows more obscure.

There's a little (exaggerated?) application of my thoughts there.
I think it needs to be a little 'wrong' to bring out surprise feeling you had (?) when you stumbled on the scene...

Lonesome
by NikonJeb

Comment by Emerkaza:
Nice colors in the sky. The clouds and field add a nice touch to the whole photo.

Night Construction
by NikonJeb

Comment by Emerkaza:
Your lighting is good here and the subject is interesting, but I am not sure what the focal point is.

Lonesome
by NikonJeb

Comment by jaysonmc:
Terrific shot Jeb! Compositional I think the image is near perfect. The texture of the grass, the low clouds, and the branches isolated in the blue sky make for a wonderful scene. The only thing is the slight blur, which detracts from a wonderful image. I think this one is underrated.

Lonesome
by NikonJeb

Comment by bmartuch:
Interesting shot Jeb. I think what I like most is the clouds. You should play with this in PS and mess with them and see what happens.

Also, I see some dust bunnies.

Night Construction
by NikonJeb

Comment by Ann:
The lighting is interesting, but there isn't a real focus to the composition.

Night Construction
by NikonJeb

Comment by jblaylockrayner:
Nice industrial feel to this - I think the PM exposure helped a rather simple scene look much better. Nice capture

Lonesome
by NikonJeb

Comment by MattBL34:
Very strong

Lonesome
by NikonJeb

Comment by manish:
Very nice. I am curious to see how bright and nice the sky would've looked if it was not a minimal editing challenge.

Lonesome
by NikonJeb

Comment by JimyThing:
Good jod getting the whole tree!