Comment by BobsterLobster: Nice family portrait. Well lit. Would work much better for me if she was looking at the top of the glass... here it just looks like she's posing for the photo as she's staring in a bored fashion at her hand. Perhaps burning the bottom of the shot (as it looks like you have done with the other edges) would help the composition? Ultimately, this is too much like a family portrait to really have much appeal for me personally.
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