Twinkle, Twinkle
by ericwoo

Comment by BakerBug:
Hello from the Critique Club!

Well it looks like you have received a lot of good feedback already. I agree with the comments regarding the lower left corner. Maybe a slightly different camera position would have helped with that. I very much like what appears to be turn signals in the middle of the oncoming traffic. I haven't seen that before in a shot like this.

Well done.
-Bill

Twinkle, Twinkle
by ericwoo

Comment by kirsty_mcn:
Sorry to get to it so late - I started a comment a few days back but never finished it.
This is a very crisp, strong cityscape. The car trails work well as a leading line, and the small aperture has worked wonders with the lights!
The area of darkness in the bottom left makes the composition a little unbalanced (but I didn't really notice it til the second time I looked at it). Conversely, the brighter area of streetlights on the right hand side works well as a compositional element right on the third.

Baited and Ready
by ericwoo

Comment by Techo:
Nicely done. Really like the color and contrast here.

Twinkle, Twinkle
by ericwoo

Comment by timfythetoo:
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Look slike if I hadnt given you that 7 I would have beaten you by a bit. We have a nice little thing going seeing each other on the same page. Very nice shot. Dont really know what I would do to this to make it better. Maybe just a tad higher saturation to make the colors a bit more vibrant - but thats a big maybe. You have a great shot here and it makes me want to go out and see if I could capture something like this. Well done.

Baited and Ready
by ericwoo

Comment by connie:
Nice shot, wonderful colors & composition!

Baited and Ready
by ericwoo

Comment by timfythetoo:
Good shot and nice colors. The overall composition has a very nice texture to it if that makes any sense. Bumping up.

Twinkle, Twinkle
by ericwoo

Comment by DanSig:
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very nice cityscape, good composition, nice colors and overall a good image, the only really distracting thing is that red light on top of one of the buildings.

Up, up and away
by ericwoo

Comment by DanSig:
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this is a nice lmage, but I think you should have waited a few hours before shooting, that bright sun burns out to big part of the image wher you could have great details if you'd wait for the sun to go away :)

Baited and Ready
by ericwoo

Comment by raish:
This meets the challenge – it’s inanimate and arranged. The elements, however, are much more connected by what they are than by how they look. 6

Twinkle, Twinkle
by ericwoo

Comment by chalice:
I thought this picture was done well. I like the range of tones from white lights to pitch black sky and left foreground. I like the inclusion of the foreground because it balances the skyline and helps add depth to the photo. The leading lines of the road way draw my eye into the heart of the picture. The star-burst street lights are an added plus.