Comment by giantmike: Overall, I really like your idea. I would like to offer a few constructive criticisms:
1. There are some things that are not sharp. With this image, it cries out to me "I want it all in tack sharpness"
2. The tea cup is bothering me, because it doesn't feel centered. I'm guessing you shot with a wide angle, so even if you are perfectly centered, the distortion is hindering. Maybe see if you could do this with 85mm or more.
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